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Jul15
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| Wed Jan 10, 2007 1:53 am Story... |
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My english teacher always making us write and stuff so i got plenty of these...
(by the way,I wrote it,so stop hatin)
Have you ever liked the sounds of natures artists outside your window, different sounds heard through both ears, so tranquil and so noisy at the same time? Anything you could think of was outside sounding away outside my window: birds and coqui’s maybe even crickets were out there. I had heard something outside, so I went to check, the sound of dry leaves rustling on the floor, running back and fourth. My hand quaking, eyes wide open, I reached for the window, once open I gazed a look outside, into the endless darkness with my flashlight. Something ran by me. I later found out it’s a chicken. I laugh it off and creep back into my pool of happiness.
It makes it easy to nod off in the icy air, with sheets as comfortable as foam and as soft as baby hair. I lay down. Ready to dive into my dreamy paradise, I started to hear something staggering, not rare, just amazing, I realized it was the sound of rain, hammering the bushes. Everything in place for the perfect sleep. Nothing else could compare to this moment. Before closing my eyes shut for the last time, I looked outside. Just in case anything else decided to disturb me. |
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Zhi13
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| Wed Jan 10, 2007 2:11 am |
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| :roll: |
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Jul15
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| Wed Jan 10, 2007 2:27 am |
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| dont be rolling ur eyes at me homie |
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Shizuru
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| Wed Jan 10, 2007 7:54 pm |
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| I think its good :) |
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Jul15
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| Wed Jan 10, 2007 9:01 pm |
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Shizuru wrote: I think its good :)
thank u :D |
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Jul15
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| Wed Jan 10, 2007 9:01 pm |
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Shizuru wrote: I think its good :)
thank u :D |
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Shizuru
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| Wed Jan 10, 2007 9:04 pm |
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| You're welcome ^^ you're a very good writer |
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Psico45
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| Thu Jan 11, 2007 1:02 am make a statement |
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| Shizuru...if you say it's good I will belive you, jul you ar elucky that shizuru was here... 8) |
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Shizuru
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| Thu Jan 11, 2007 3:57 pm |
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| Haha glad you believe in me |
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Psico45
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| Thu Jan 11, 2007 5:40 pm make a statement |
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| But of course if I dint then who would? |
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Jul15
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| Fri Jan 12, 2007 12:14 am |
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| THANK U :D |
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Jeyi-San
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| Fri Jan 12, 2007 12:21 am |
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| :shock: & so the dude can write! awesome!! I still think my poem was better...joke! :P |
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Psico45
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| Fri Jan 12, 2007 1:34 pm make a statement |
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| You know jeyi I am giving the credit to yours since that one I read because it was short... |
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