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Psico45 The Psychotic Moderator

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Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2007 8:02 pm Post subject: To Actually post some poems!!!! |
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Darkness falls across the land
The midnite hour is close at hand
Creatures crawl in search of blood
To terrorize y'awl's neighborhood
And whosoever shall be found
Without the soul for getting down
Must stand and face the hounds of hell
And rot inside a corpse's shell
The foulest stench is in the air
The funk of forty thousand years
And grizzly ghouls from every tomb
Are closing in to seal your doom
And though you fight to stay alive
Your body starts to shiver
For no mere mortal can resist
The evil of the thriller
(Rap performed by Vincent Price For the Thriler song of Michael Jackson) _________________ Walk into the Darkness and the light will fade away.
...Creativity.... it's just one color away... |
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Krado Site Administrator

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Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2007 8:59 pm Post subject: |
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This is the first poem in english I made a long time ago...it's very short and I wrote it in a time of desperation (this poem and my other ones will be posted in the main website once I get the "resources" section finished. Well, here I go, hope you enjoy:
Endless Agony
Like any other silent night
I lie on my bed breathless,
not thinking what is wrong or right
wishing to stay in the darkness...
As I close my eyes with desires,
hopes and wishes inside my heart
that turn into a work of art.
But those wishes are thrown in the fires.
Since I can't get what I hope,
I cover myself with a dark rope.
Sleeping quietly and silently...
entering the endless time, endless agony. _________________ Walk Towards The Light And The Shadows Will Fall Behind You... |
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Shizuru Graceful Moderator

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Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2007 9:09 pm Post subject: |
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They are both great poems, God I love dark and angsty poems like that...I must write one and post it! _________________
The more it hurts...the more I want to be hurt. |
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Shizuru Graceful Moderator

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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 6:04 pm Post subject: |
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Yay I finally have something to post!
This illusion, this fantasy, I tell you this doesn’t have to be
I’ll never let you fall from me
I’ll break this wall draw you close you’ll see
This figment of your mind, the fear manifests inside
Through fire, storm we'll be together
I’m not like the others, my love lasts forever
So here I stand,
On your side of the wall
With no one else’s hand
I'll answer if you call
So stand up let me hold you
Just the way I always do
To show you that I only LOVE you… _________________
The more it hurts...the more I want to be hurt. |
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Psico45 The Psychotic Moderator

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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 6:41 pm Post subject: make a statement |
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Beautifull...creepy, but beautifull...  _________________ Walk into the Darkness and the light will fade away.
...Creativity.... it's just one color away... |
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Shizuru Graceful Moderator

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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 6:43 pm Post subject: |
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Haha I love to write creepy angsty love poems. They rock _________________
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Psico45 The Psychotic Moderator

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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 7:16 pm Post subject: make a statement |
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I bet you do... _________________ Walk into the Darkness and the light will fade away.
...Creativity.... it's just one color away... |
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Shizuru Graceful Moderator

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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 7:22 pm Post subject: |
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And whats that supposed to mean? lol _________________
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Psico45 The Psychotic Moderator

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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 10:25 pm Post subject: make a statement |
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This goes out to anyone who cares but it was mented for an ingrate that dint actually get it:
Bah! yea right even when a person stammers a pray will it get answered? and when is the point of have leaned to low? I have gotten so low that the tears of blood I cry for have runned up my back! Every day after I see a beautyfull man on the mirror I watch with shame of what I have becomed waiting for the miracle of my prays to happend but I guess it can not be helped right? _________________ Walk into the Darkness and the light will fade away.
...Creativity.... it's just one color away... |
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Shizuru Graceful Moderator

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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 10:27 pm Post subject: |
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Holy crap... pretty dark poem, but awesome nonetheless.  _________________
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Psico45 The Psychotic Moderator

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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 10:29 pm Post subject: make a statement |
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Thx I made it 5 minutes ago... _________________ Walk into the Darkness and the light will fade away.
...Creativity.... it's just one color away... |
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Shizuru Graceful Moderator

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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 10:39 pm Post subject: |
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Awesome, it came out cool _________________
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Psico45 The Psychotic Moderator

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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 10:48 pm Post subject: make a statement |
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once again...thx  _________________ Walk into the Darkness and the light will fade away.
...Creativity.... it's just one color away... |
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Psico45 The Psychotic Moderator

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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 10:56 pm Post subject: make a statement |
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Everything Lies on the choices you make...
Ok listen to this:
He lays the needle in the vein
and he asks the music to come inside
between his throat and forearm
the melody travels softly in the bones
He has closed his eyes
a battle rages in his blood
an army marches through his bowel
the intestines become warm slowly
Nothing is for you
nothing was for you
nothing remains for you
forever
He takes the needle from the vein
the melody travels out of the skin
violins burn with shrieking
harps cut the flesh
he has opened his eyes
but he is not awake
Nothing is for you
nothing was for you
nothing remains for you
forever _________________ Walk into the Darkness and the light will fade away.
...Creativity.... it's just one color away...
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Shizuru Graceful Moderator

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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 10:58 pm Post subject: |
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Wow that was really really awesome... I'm trying to make another but I aint getting inspired lol _________________
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