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Psico45 The Psychotic Moderator

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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 11:11 pm Post subject: |
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You see him creeping around the church
he has been alone for a year
The sadness took away all of his senses
he sleeps every night by her grave
There, by the bells sleeps a stone
and I alone can read it
and on the fence, the red maiden
who was your heart at that time
The fear has been skewered on this fence
I now go digging every night
to see what still remains
of the face that smiled for me
There by the bells I spend the night
there between snails, a lonely animal
during the day I run after the night
you escape me for the second time
with my hands I dig deep
to find what I missed so much
and under the moon in its most beautiful dress
I have kissed your cold mouth
I take you tenderly by the arm
but your skin rips like paper
and parts fall off of you
as you escape me for the second time
So I take what still remains
the night is hot and we are together
according to the curse the rooster greets the morning
so I hacked off his head so that our time would not fade
_________________ Walk into the Darkness and the light will fade away.
...Creativity.... it's just one color away... |
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Psico45 The Psychotic Moderator

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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 11:12 pm Post subject: make a statement |
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I love this part of the website... _________________ Walk into the Darkness and the light will fade away.
...Creativity.... it's just one color away... |
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Shizuru Graceful Moderator

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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 11:42 pm Post subject: |
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Yeah it really is great. I love poetry....and im still not inspired T-T _________________
The more it hurts...the more I want to be hurt. |
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Psico45 The Psychotic Moderator

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Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 5:22 am Post subject: make a statement |
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just think of an all man world and their is only one female warrior trying to defend her honor as a woman... _________________ Walk into the Darkness and the light will fade away.
...Creativity.... it's just one color away... |
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Psico45 The Psychotic Moderator

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Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 7:23 pm Post subject: make a statement |
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Shizuru, this is for you, it is the lyrics of Feuer frei on english:
Whoever knows pain becomes criticized
from the fire that burned up the skin
I throw a light in my face
a hot cry
open fire!
Whoever knows pain is raised
from the fire that burns in desire
a hard thrust (that gives off sparks) into her womb
a hot cry
open fire!
Whoever knows pain is dangerous
from the fire that burns the soul
bang bang
the burned child is dangerous
with fire that separates from the life
a hot cry
open fire!
That is the most resumed as possible... _________________ Walk into the Darkness and the light will fade away.
...Creativity.... it's just one color away... |
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Jeyi-San Forum Master

Joined: 09 Jan 2007 Posts: 116 Karma: +3 (3)
Location: lala land (PR)
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Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 10:11 pm Post subject: |
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This is my second so lay off...
Strange voices outside asking me if I wanna play
Strange creatures inside
Can't you just go away.
I see a baby in my eyes
She see's tears in mines
She begins to whisper in my ear
"Oh God, their here"
They arrive holding candles
Wearing long robes & sandles
I wonder who they are
I can see them from far
I hear voices
Saying I got a lot of choices
They yell at me...
I close my eyes, look away, but wait.
How could this be?
I smell the ocean
I see some motion
Maybe nine to ten feet
Or maybe its just a beat
In a blink of an eye
Im wearing a tie
Wondering how could this be
Maybe its me
But wait. I see a key
No more ties
No more babies
No more sandles
Where am I?
One hand on the key
The other on a he or maybe a she, cant tell
My eyes are closed
I appear in a show
In this show I made a team
Could this be a dream?
All of a sudden im flying
But wait, whats all that crying?
I hit the floor
Thats it! No more!
Wake up
Wake up
says the old chum
Seems you hade a nightmare my dear
cheer up
Its a sunny day
Go outside & play
Oh God, I say
Not again! No way!...
Krado, remember this one?  |
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Psico45 The Psychotic Moderator

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Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 12:23 am Post subject: make a statement |
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My God it's brilliant! It makes me what to post this for female piano players...(you know who you are, LOL)
Piano
They say to me
unlock this door
the curiosity becomes a scream
what certainly could be behind it
behind this door
stands a piano
the keys are dusty
the strings are out of tune
behind this door
she sits at the piano
but she doesn't play anymore
oh, that was so long ago
There, at the piano
I listened to her
and when her playing began
I held my breath
She said to me
I'll always stay with you
but it only seemed
that she played for me alone
I poured her blood
into the fire of my rage
I locked the door
they asked for her
There, at the piano
I listened to her
and when her playing began
I held my breath
There, at the piano
I stood beside her
it seemed
she played for me alone
The door is open
oh, how they scream
I hear the mother pleading
the father is beating me
they take her from the piano
and no one believes me here
that I am deathly ill
from sorrow deep with in
There, at the piano
I listened to her
and when her playing began
I held my breath
There, at the piano
she listened to me
and when my playing began
she held her breath _________________ Walk into the Darkness and the light will fade away.
...Creativity.... it's just one color away... |
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Jeyi-San Forum Master

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Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 12:40 am Post subject: |
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awesome!!!! it kinda seems like a song to me u got talent dude! |
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Shizuru Graceful Moderator

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Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 9:06 pm Post subject: |
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Great poem Jeyi-san!
And awesome poem Psico! Its the first piano related poem ive ever read and its brilliant! Is it for me? hihi _________________
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Psico45 The Psychotic Moderator

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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 1:01 am Post subject: make a statement |
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I said it, it is for every female piano player....but yea it is intended to you...
oh and jeyi, all the poems can be singe dif you get a tune or the correct melody for it...that's the beauty of it... _________________ Walk into the Darkness and the light will fade away.
...Creativity.... it's just one color away... |
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Shizuru Graceful Moderator

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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 3:58 pm Post subject: |
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Yay a poem for me! Hell yeah! _________________
The more it hurts...the more I want to be hurt. |
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Psico45 The Psychotic Moderator

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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 5:36 pm Post subject: make a statement |
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Hahahaha! Enjoy it then.... _________________ Walk into the Darkness and the light will fade away.
...Creativity.... it's just one color away... |
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Rocker Site Administrator

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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 6:17 pm Post subject: |
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Ive never writen a poem i dont think i ever will cuz i dont like them but dont listen to me if u like them keep on doing them, hehe _________________ The closer you are to the light the bigger your shadow is. |
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Psico45 The Psychotic Moderator

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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 11:13 pm Post subject: make a statement |
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Well now that I have your permision I guess I can now keep writting in peace...  _________________ Walk into the Darkness and the light will fade away.
...Creativity.... it's just one color away... |
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Psico45 The Psychotic Moderator

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Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 3:50 am Post subject: |
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Try this, ninja poetry:
Flower prety flower
I stoped to smell you
you take my nose away.
Wait a minte
you were to sharp to be a flower
now I have no nose
Face blody face... _________________ Walk into the Darkness and the light will fade away.
...Creativity.... it's just one color away... |
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